Postcard Feedback to Emma

Overall thoughts

• I like your type treatment with bold quote and separation from attributer with light small caps
• Nice that you have solid background - offers contrast with type and easy read
• Styles of images (media and color) different among the three, but I think it’s fine with common concept and type
• A little more horizontal for desktop image
• Feels quite square in dimension and white space makes the two experiences different
• Can add the same purple in photoshop in 1st image, orange to 3rd
• Images feel a bit pixelated/low res
• Font is small on mobile, fine for desktop on all images

1st (taco)

• Cut out left corner w the second hand
• Maybe can copy and paste some of the other food elements on the side while elongating it horizontally

2nd (donut)

• Maybe move image to center in desktop version, have the full image showing
• Cropping makes sense in vertical mobile format but more satisfying showing the entire thing in desktop
• Think it would fit more with the other images as a set if added background color but not crucial

3rd (spaghetti)

• Line length on mobile feels good - I like that you adjusted it from desktop version
• Font is too small on mobile, though, so it might end up changing with scale shift

Final thoughts

• The white on the orange background for spaghetti one is really nice because it goes with the white noodles
• The black on the donut is already looking like dark brown in the image
• Maybe make the text on the taco one red/orange, pulling from another color in the image
• I feel like maybe the last two images and quotes can be switched
• Not sure about the donut one, actually, but the digital feel and the white noodles makes sense with the quote about technology and downloading food
• Hang quotation marks (optical alignment)